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Posted by taurus108109 on September 23, 2007 - 02:55:
Author: taurus
Date: Sun Sep 23 02:54:57 2007
New Revision: 20677

URL: http://svn.gna.org/viewcvs/wesnoth?rev=20677&view=rev
Log:
Text Polishing and Balancing

Modified:
    trunk/changelog
    trunk/data/campaigns/Northern_Rebirth/scenarios/07a_Settling_Disputes.cfg
    trunk/data/campaigns/Northern_Rebirth/scenarios/08a_Elvish_Princess.cfg
    trunk/data/campaigns/Northern_Rebirth/scenarios/09a_Introductions.cfg
    trunk/data/campaigns/Northern_Rebirth/scenarios/10a_Stolen_Gold.cfg

Modified: trunk/changelog
URL: 
http://svn.gna.org/viewcvs/wesnoth/trunk/changelog?rev=20677&r1=20676&r2=20677&view=diff
==============================================================================
--- trunk/changelog (original)
+++ trunk/changelog Sun Sep 23 02:54:57 2007
@@ -4,7 +4,7 @@
     * Fixed big where Father Marcus regenerates in the wrong place in one 
the death events.
     * Rescaled Rakshas' portrait to the proper size.
     * Balancing of opening event in 'Settling Disputes'
-    * Various minor bug-fixes.
+    * Various minor polishing and bug-fixes.
   * Son of the Black Eye
     * Fixed bug in 'The Coward' where an enemy unit speaks as if he is on 
your side.
     * A bit of dialogue polishing in 'The Coward'

Modified: 
trunk/data/campaigns/Northern_Rebirth/scenarios/07a_Settling_Disputes.cfg
URL: 
http://svn.gna.org/viewcvs/wesnoth/trunk/data/campaigns/Northern_Rebirth/scenarios/07a_Settling_Disputes.cfg?rev=20677&r1=20676&r2=20677&view=diff
==============================================================================
--- trunk/data/campaigns/Northern_Rebirth/scenarios/07a_Settling_Disputes.cfg 
(original)
+++ trunk/data/campaigns/Northern_Rebirth/scenarios/07a_Settling_Disputes.cfg 
Sun Sep 23 02:54:57 2007
@@ -956,7 +956,7 @@
 
         [message]
             description="Ro'Arthian1"
-            message= _ " *words dripping sarcasm* Wow! Someone FINALLY 
figured it out!"
+            message= _ "Wow! Someone FINALLY figured it out!"
         [/message]
 
         [message]
@@ -1049,7 +1049,7 @@
 
         [message]
             description=Stalrag1
-            message= _ " *glares at Ro'Arthian* Very well, Tallin. We don't 
like it, but if that's what is needed to save Knalga, we shall do it."
+            message= _ "Well Tallin, if you put it that way... We don't like 
it, but if that's what is needed to save Knalga, we shall do it."
         [/message]
 
         [message]
@@ -1059,7 +1059,7 @@
 
         [message]
             description=Stalrag1
-            message= _ " *mumbles* It's no great compensation."
+            message= _ " *mumbles* Yeah, great compensation..."
         [/message]
 
         [message]

Modified: 
trunk/data/campaigns/Northern_Rebirth/scenarios/08a_Elvish_Princess.cfg
URL: 
http://svn.gna.org/viewcvs/wesnoth/trunk/data/campaigns/Northern_Rebirth/scenarios/08a_Elvish_Princess.cfg?rev=20677&r1=20676&r2=20677&view=diff
==============================================================================
--- trunk/data/campaigns/Northern_Rebirth/scenarios/08a_Elvish_Princess.cfg 
(original)
+++ trunk/data/campaigns/Northern_Rebirth/scenarios/08a_Elvish_Princess.cfg 
Sun Sep 23 02:54:57 2007
@@ -77,16 +77,6 @@
         [part]
             story= _ "Allies? I take it we're to go to them and ask them to 
join us in return for our help in rescuing their Princess? You heard their 
message - those elves have got their noses so high in the air they canna see 
over them. They wouldna ally themsel' with the likes o' us."
             background=portraits/Hamel.jpg
-        [/part]
-
-        [part]
-            story= _ "The dwarf has a point, there."
-            background=portraits/Arthian.jpg
-        [/part]
-
-        [part]
-            story= _ "Shut up, lich!"
-            background=portraits/Stalrag.jpg
         [/part]
 
         [part]
@@ -235,6 +225,7 @@
     [side]
         type=Orcish Warlord
         description=Atul
+       user_description= _ "Atul"
         canrecruit=1
         side=2
         {GOLD4 200 300 400 500}

Modified: 
trunk/data/campaigns/Northern_Rebirth/scenarios/09a_Introductions.cfg
URL: 
http://svn.gna.org/viewcvs/wesnoth/trunk/data/campaigns/Northern_Rebirth/scenarios/09a_Introductions.cfg?rev=20677&r1=20676&r2=20677&view=diff
==============================================================================
--- trunk/data/campaigns/Northern_Rebirth/scenarios/09a_Introductions.cfg 
(original)
+++ trunk/data/campaigns/Northern_Rebirth/scenarios/09a_Introductions.cfg Sun 
Sep 23 02:54:57 2007
@@ -65,21 +65,21 @@
         [/unit]
 
         {TROLL_RAIDER 9 4}
+        {TROLL_RAIDER 13 4}
         {TROLL_RAIDER 9 4}
         {TROLL_RAIDER 9 4}
+        {TROLL_JUNIOR 13 4}
         {TROLL_RAIDER 9 4}
-        {TROLL_JUNIOR 9 4}
-        {TROLL_RAIDER 9 4}
-        {TROLL_JUNIOR 9 4}
+        {TROLL_JUNIOR 13 4}
         {TROLL_RAIDER 9 4}
         {TROLL_JUNIOR 9 4}
         {TROLL_JUNIOR 9 4}
         {TROLL_JUNIOR 9 4}
         {TROLL_JUNIOR 9 4}
+        {RANGED_RAIDER 13 4}
         {RANGED_RAIDER 9 4}
         {RANGED_RAIDER 9 4}
-        {RANGED_RAIDER 9 4}
-        {RANGED_RAIDER 9 4}
+        {RANGED_RAIDER 13 4}
         {RANGED_RAIDER 9 4}
         {RANGED_RAIDER 9 4}
 
@@ -224,7 +224,7 @@
 
                 [message]
                     description=Anita
-                    message= _ " *eyes shining* You're right, Elenia, Tallin 
is truly a hero."
+                    message= _ "You're right, Elenia, Tallin is truly a 
hero."
                 [/message]
 
                 [message]
@@ -284,7 +284,7 @@
 
                 [message]
                     description=Anita
-                    message= _ "Why did you not soeak of this before? Let us 
immediately send out them gryphon with my personal seal telling them that I 
shall be taking command of the force. Tell them to come straight to Knalga 
and meet me there."
+                    message= _ "Why did you not speak of this before? Let us 
immediately send out the gryphons with my personal seal telling them that I 
shall be taking command of the force. Tell them to come straight to Knalga 
and meet me there."
                 [/message]
 
                 [message]

Modified: trunk/data/campaigns/Northern_Rebirth/scenarios/10a_Stolen_Gold.cfg
URL: 
http://svn.gna.org/viewcvs/wesnoth/trunk/data/campaigns/Northern_Rebirth/scenarios/10a_Stolen_Gold.cfg?rev=20677&r1=20676&r2=20677&view=diff
==============================================================================
--- trunk/data/campaigns/Northern_Rebirth/scenarios/10a_Stolen_Gold.cfg 
(original)
+++ trunk/data/campaigns/Northern_Rebirth/scenarios/10a_Stolen_Gold.cfg Sun 
Sep 23 02:54:57 2007
@@ -94,12 +94,12 @@
 
     [story]
         [part]
-            story= _ "Though puzzled by the presence of trolls so close to 
the dwarvish defenses, the party quickly made their way back to Knalga."
+            story= _ "Puzzled by the presence of trolls so close to the 
dwarvish defenses, the party quickly made their way back to Knalga."
             music=nr-sad.ogg
         [/part]
 
         [part]
-            story= _ "However, upon arriving there something seemed to be 
wrong. Instead of being hailed boisterously by the Dwarves as they usually 
were, they were met by silent guards with downcast eyes."
+            story= _ "Upon arriving there something seemed to be wrong. 
Instead of being hailed boisterously by the Dwarves as they usually were, 
they were met by silent guards with downcast eyes."
         [/part]
 
         [part]
@@ -672,7 +672,7 @@
 
         [message]
             speaker=narrator
-            message= _ "However, upon emerging from the tunnels, the party 
found themselves surrounded."
+            message= _ "Upon emerging from the tunnels, the party found 
themselves surrounded."
             image=wesnoth-icon.png
         [/message]
 
@@ -709,16 +709,6 @@
         [message]
             description=Camerin
             message= _ "Yeeeahhhh! I like it!"
-        [/message]
-
-        [message]
-            description="Ro'Sothian"
-            message= _ "Haha! Arn't you glad we came along brother?"
-        [/message]
-
-        [message]
-            description="Ro'Arthian"
-            message= _ "Haha! This is gonna be fun!"
         [/message]
 
         [objectives]




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