mail[Wesnoth-commits] r20156 - /trunk/data/campaigns/The_South_Guard/utils/sg_story.cfg


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Posted by esr on September 07, 2007 - 05:36:
Author: esr
Date: Fri Sep  7 05:36:16 2007
New Revision: 20156

URL: http://svn.gna.org/viewcvs/wesnoth?rev=20156&view=rev
Log:
Usage fixes and a minor storyline improvement.

Modified:
    trunk/data/campaigns/The_South_Guard/utils/sg_story.cfg

Modified: trunk/data/campaigns/The_South_Guard/utils/sg_story.cfg
URL: 
http://svn.gna.org/viewcvs/wesnoth/trunk/data/campaigns/The_South_Guard/utils/sg_story.cfg?rev=20156&r1=20155&r2=20156&view=diff
==============================================================================
--- trunk/data/campaigns/The_South_Guard/utils/sg_story.cfg (original)
+++ trunk/data/campaigns/The_South_Guard/utils/sg_story.cfg Fri Sep  7 
05:36:16 2007
@@ -12,15 +12,15 @@
         [/part]
         [part]
             background=story/summer.jpg
-            story= _ "Then, In the spring of the ninth year the reports from 
the South Guard, under the command of Sir Loris, stopped suddenly.  King 
Haldric decided to send someone to investigate."
+            story= _ "Then, in the spring of the ninth year the reports from 
the South Guard, under the command of Sir Loris, stopped suddenly.  King 
Haldric decided to send someone to investigate."
         [/part]
         [part]
             background=story/summer.jpg
-            story= _ "King Haldric summoned a young, undistinguished but 
promising calvery officer named Deoran, the son of Haldiel - who rode with 
Konrad I.  The king had a mission for him."
+            story= _ "King Haldric summoned a young, undistinguished but 
promising cavalry officer named Deoran. Deoran was the son of Haldiel, who 
had foughtwith distinction alongside Konrad I in the wars against the orcs.  
The king had a mission for Haldiel's son."
         [/part]
         [part]
             background=story/summer.jpg
-            story= _ "King Haldric knighted young Deoron, and when he rose 
tasked him to ride south towards Westin, the capital of the province of 
Kerlath, to replace Sir Loris as commander of the South Guard..."
+            story= _ "King Haldric knighted young Deoron, and when he rose 
tasked him to ride south to Westin, the capital of the province of Kerlath, 
to demand an accounting from Sir Loris, the commander of the South Guard..."
         [/part]
         [part]
             background=story/bigmap.jpg




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